I used to be an English teacher so forgive me for two things:
1) I think that my suggested edit, and the other few dozen similar ones I could make, do not improve the article even if they are more in line with the Wikipedian NPOV and NOR policies.
2) The words "sadly" and "mediocrity" are cues that would have suggested #1 already.
1) I think that my suggested edit, and the other few dozen similar ones I could make, do not improve the article even if they are more in line with the Wikipedian NPOV and NOR policies.
2) The words "sadly" and "mediocrity" are cues that would have suggested #1 already.